Imposter

What do you think this is!?

Garbage. Words on a page, written by a guy who can't write, who can't form one thought long enough on a page, pouring nothing special but time into the void. The mind wanders too much. I don't know where to put punctuation. I did not understand what Mrs. Sherwood was getting at when she taught us sentence structure. I swear if someone says "participle" again like it's supposed to be common knowledge I am going to... am I supposed to know what parts of descriptive descriptions go where in the big sentence? I am irate with all of this.

It could have been been a good day if it was started better.
Terrible word choice.

He wanted to be better at the work.
Short and uninteresting.

When the day had started, the sun was still up and he had started to write down subconscious thoughts onto the paper hoping that maybe this time they would give him more purpose in the day than to just trim the hedges and watch movies.
Too long and still uninteresting.

This is absolute crap.
Censor.

This is not good at all.
Censor.

You suck.
Censor.

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